http://www.clusterflock.org/2006/12/the-world-come-of-age-promotional-material.html a site about everything Tue, 14 Feb 2012 05:27:04 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://www.clusterflock.org/2006/12/the-world-come-of-age-promotional-material.html/comment-page-1#comment-2988 Aaron Winslow Tue, 19 Dec 2006 11:59:34 +0000 http://wp.patrickburleson.com/?p=3133#comment-2988 I think it works well. I congratulate you! The only sentence that I find kind of awkward is the one about letting the community speak for itself. My suggestion would be to substitute little short biographical sentences about the director... Deron Bauman is the author of Mockingbird and the founding editor of elimae. This is his first film. ... i might just be talking jive here though. I think it works well. I congratulate you! The only sentence that I find kind of awkward is the one about letting the community speak for itself. My suggestion would be to substitute little short biographical sentences about the director… Deron Bauman is the author of Mockingbird and the founding editor of elimae. This is his first film. … i might just be talking jive here though.

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