June 5, 2010

sentence inversion

I can see it in my eye’s mind.

comments

  1. Deron Bauman on June 5th, 2010 at 3:02 pm

    fuck. I read it ‘correctly’.

  2. Sheila Ryan on June 5th, 2010 at 3:10 pm

    So did I.

  3. Dave Vogt on June 5th, 2010 at 3:47 pm

    My eyes are so forgetful they can’t remember what I had for breakfast.

  4. Andrew Simone on June 5th, 2010 at 3:59 pm

    mine can’t remember what one my ex-girlfriends looks like.

  5. Danny on June 5th, 2010 at 4:02 pm

    I can remember what my mother looked like, but I can’t quite recall her voice. Could I hear it in my ear’s mind?

  6. Daryl Scroggins on June 5th, 2010 at 4:36 pm

    This reminds me of Faulkner’s “Memory believes before knowing remembers.”

  7. Kelsey Parker on June 6th, 2010 at 12:53 am

    Was that me? That sounds exactly like something I would say. Especially since I read it “correctly,” like Deron and Sheila.

  8. Andrew Simone on June 6th, 2010 at 8:22 am

    Not his time, Kelsey. Just a game I have been playing to occupy by mind.

  9. Deron Bauman on June 6th, 2010 at 8:50 am

    was that intentional, Andrew?

  10. Andrew Simone on June 6th, 2010 at 9:20 am

    Absolutely

  11. Deron Bauman on June 6th, 2010 at 9:23 am

    I meant this: Not his time, Kelsey.

  12. Sheila Ryan on June 6th, 2010 at 9:33 am

    Occupy by mind. Down by law.

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