October 26, 2010

After Butt-Picking

Amanda Mae, if you will allow my take:

My long two-pointed ladder’s sticking through a tree
Toward heaven still,
And there’s a barrel that I didn’t fill
Beside it, and there may be two or three
Butts I didn’t pick upon some bough.
But I am done with butt-picking now.
Essence of winter sleep is on the night,
The scent of butts: I am drowsing off.
I cannot rub the strangeness from my sight
I got from looking through a pane of glass
I skimmed this morning from the drinking trough
And held against the world of hoary grass.
It melted, and I let it fall and break.
But I was well
Upon my way to sleep before it fell,
And I could tell
What form my dreaming was about to take.
Magnified butts appear and disappear,
Stem end and blossom end,
And every fleck of russet showing clear.
My instep arch not only keeps the ache,
It keeps the pressure of a ladder-round.
I feel the ladder sway as the boughs bend.

And I keep hearing from the cellar bin
The rumbling sound
Of load on load of butts coming in.
For I have had too much
Of butt-picking: I am overtired
Of the great harvest I myself desired.
There were ten thousand thousand fruit to touch,
Cherish in hand, lift down, and not let fall.
For all
That struck the earth,
No matter if not bruised or spiked with stubble,
Went surely to the cider-butt heap
As of no worth.
One can see what will trouble
This sleep of mine, whatever sleep it is.
Were he not gone,
The woodchuck could say whether it’s like his
Long sleep, as I describe its coming on,
Or just some human sleep.

– For Cindy.

comments

  1. Cindy Scroggins on October 26th, 2010 at 6:42 pm

    For I have had too much
    Of butt-picking: I am overtired

    Oh, Rick, thank you.

    Here’s one for you:

    My butt aches
    And a drowsy numbness pains my sense
    As though of hemlock I have drunk
    Or emptied some dull opiate to the dregs.

    (I did that from memory, believe it or not, so it might not be exactly right. But the muse was with me, so I had to type fast.)

  2. Rick Neece on October 26th, 2010 at 6:43 pm

    God, help me. I am especially enamored of And every fleck of russet showing clear in the defiling of these words.

  3. Amanda Mae Meyncke on October 26th, 2010 at 6:44 pm

    oh god it’s so good.

  4. Cindy Scroggins on October 26th, 2010 at 6:45 pm

    Where’s Renner? This is right up his alley.

    And I apologize, Amanda Mae, for applying your brilliant idea to Keats. I find that butts go well with almost anyone’s poetry.

    Good butts make good neighbors.

  5. Amanda Mae Meyncke on October 26th, 2010 at 6:46 pm

    Fish and butts stink after three days.

  6. Rick Neece on October 26th, 2010 at 7:24 pm

    We will have to look for more good butt poems.

  7. Rick Neece on October 26th, 2010 at 7:53 pm

    Cindy, let’s type when the fire is upon us always.

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